Thursday, February 11, 2016

Against the Wall by Dorothy F. Shaw



Against the Wall

By Dorothy F. Shaw

For those who don’t know me, Dorothy is one of my favorite Authors. I in fact found this book on my own, searching out a book to read of hers, because I was truly desiring a true orgasmic read. Yes, you read that right. And I was hoping there was something out there of hers that I might not have read yet, and when I managed to get to Amazon I found two books, and this one was just listed.

So I started reading it, and then went to Dorothy to yell at her for not telling me about it. That’s how I know it was just listed. I also know some of the answers to the interview questions I ask, before I even ask them, but I did that for you, my readers. ::wink!::

As I opened this book, the first thing that grabbed me, was the dedication. That in itself, will make you think, and it truly goes along with the book, trust me, at the end you will completely understand the dedication even more so.

“Dedication: This short story is dedicated to anyone who’s ever had to let someone go-regardless of the fact that they were still deeply in love with them. When the pain becomes so great, sometimes, we are left with no choice but to save ourselves. And yet, we still wonder….what if?” ~Dorothy F. Shaw

Jake and Maggie have the most loving and orgasmic relationship that you could ever desire. They truly love one another, and the sex is just absolutely perfection.

They truly enjoy one another, but it just seems as though as you are reading this, it is like there are commitment issues. And it is like 'awe come on', are we ever going to go any further, and get more serious, and make the relationship into a real relationship? A true and everlasting keeper kind of forever type of love. But it is like at a sit still. And as you are reading, you just know that Maggie seems to want more, and Jake just seems to be stuck. But on the same token, you know that yes, they do love one another.

And then, comes the “Dear John” letter. I stopped reading. I said out loud, “Oh no you didn’t!!” And I reread it again:

“Please wait, because I’ll be back and than I’ll give you all of me. I promise. Always Jake.”
Um no…Dude.  Wait for you? To what?! Grow up?! Do you realize she could find somebody better? What while you are out doing what? Playing the field? Drinking? Doing what you want to do?! Just sit here and wait? NO! Are you for real?!

I kept reading, Maggie knew better than to just sit there waiting, even though she knew she loved him even still. I calmed down. I was angry, and sad, and crying. I could not believe my eyes. I felt bad, and sad, and…oh my goodness this book just tore me up from the floor up.

At this point I knew I had read a five star book. Real emotions and real feelings, and real life. People truly do this, and this really happens, and I just read the ever famous “Dear John” and “Wait for me” game.  Many people have gone through this, and some are lame enough to wait. Their choice.  I know this is something so heart breaking, because we’ve all had relationships. But the fact is, things like this cause many to go into depressions, without even realizing. 

“Against the Wall” is written so realistically that I just couldn’t put it down, and it brought out so many feelings that I enjoyed it immensely. This book is truly worth the read, and as usual Dorothy has kept the readers entertained and on the edge of their seats. Again, this, as with all of Dorothy's books, are a five star read. You need to get it, and read it. You will be "Against the Wall" yourself with so many emotions, trust me!

My Questions for Dorothy:

1. What made you write this book and how long did it take?

I wrote this book - aka very short story - in 2010. It was part of my journey into writing, and I was definitely still learning when I wrote the first draft of it. I honestly don’t recall how long it took me or even what made me write it other than an idea came to me so I ran with it. At the time, it was the longest story I’d ever written. Since then, it’s gone through several rounds of edits, especially a couple of months ago when I decided to self publish it on Amazon. 

But here’s a little more history for you: I have a rather methodical mind, and I tend to follow a process. So, I wrote this and when I was done, my next goal was to write a novella—20k words tops. That novella was called “The Office”. Needless to say, that novella turned into a novel, which turned into a series, and became what we know today as Unworthy Heart, book 1 in The Donnellys series.


2. What made you decide to self publish this book?

Simple: This story does not have a happy ever after ending. It doesn’t even have a happy for now ending…although in my opinion, Maggie does what she needs to do in order to find her own happy ending. However, you can’t really sell a story with no HEA or HFN in romance or erotica to a publisher. Plus, its a very, very short story. Because of all of those factors, I really felt it was just best to put it up myself and see if anyone reads it. My though is, there are many people who will likely identify with the story. Many people know what its like to have a broken heart, myself included. 

3. Please tell everyone what you already told me about your cover:

Ah, yes. The awesome cover was designed by my ex-husband, T.D. Hoffman. He’s also a writer, and co-wrote my first book published called Spare Hearts. T is one of those good at anything he does kind of guys. It’s one of the many awesome things about him. And although he’s my ex, he makes all my promo items or covers for self pub works for me. He also helps me plot on occasion. Because we are still friends, it makes doing all that writing stuff together easy. It also makes co-parenting our kids easy too. 


4. Do you have photos or descriptions of Jake, Maggie or even Jen?

Nope. LOL Sorry. But…according to what I wrote, Jen has curly dark brown hair. Maggie has thick blonde hair and Jake has long dark brown hair. That’s about all I believe. See? I was still learning a lot when I wrote this story and honestly, I left the rest up to the readers imagination when I got it cleaned up to publish. =)


5. Have you ever received a "Dear John" letter like Maggie’s?

I don’t know if I’d call the letter a “Dear John” because Jake wasn’t breaking up with her really. Rather he was once more turning his back but at the same time trying to make sure she was there for whenever he decided he was going to come back. I like to call that “fuckery” for lack of a better word. But yes, I’ve for sure had someone cast bait like that and in some cases, over and over again in order to keep me on the hook. And it didn’t have to come in the form of a letter. Something like that can come in all forms…text, voicemail, email, or face to face.


6. What are you working on now?

Right now I am writing Jaded Heart, book 4 in The Donnellys series. =) It’s due to release November 2016.


7. What is your favorite place to write?

I write in my family room, in one specific chair. When I show people my special chair, I say: “This is where the magic happens.” LOL 


8. What helps you carry out these delicious orgasmic sex scenes?

Ummmm…Well, I wish I could say that I’ve done every single thing my characters have, but sadly, I haven’t… I mean really, that would be pretty crazy and awesome at the same time. And does anyone ever ask a horror author if they draw on real experience when they write about killing people? Nope. LOL Truth is, much of it is just good old fashioned imagination, it’s what we writers do. A bit may come from past experiences, sure but then in the end, I just write what the characters tell me. I do what ever they say! And they are really demanding. LOL 


9. The dedication- has that happened to you?
Yes. And only because it’s you, I’ll add that I’m walking through it right now. 


10. Please provide your social and book links:

http://www.dorothyfshaw.com/
http://www.facebook.com/DorothyFShaw
https://www.facebook.com/TheDonnellysseries
https://twitter.com/DorothyFShaw


The Donnellys Series:
SHATTERED HEART - 

DEFENSIVE HEART - 

UNWORTHY HEART - 

Single Title: 
AGAINST THE WALL - 

THREE TIMES LUCKY - 

SPARE HEARTS -  




11. Anything to add:
Just that I always appreciate your support of my writing. Thanks, sweetie. <3


 About the Author:



Dorothy F. Shaw stumbled into a career in Corporate America and has spent the last 18 years climbing the corporate ladder. A fan of journaling about her troubles, she started an online blog in 2009, and poured her emotions out for all to see.
As luck would have it, the first post came out in the form of a poem. A few authors she'd met online encouraged her to write more, and in the span of 2 years she wrote over 150 poems. The poems led to short stories, which blossomed into novels. Evident from the very beginning was her voice as an author that is real and packed with wit and sarcasm. Her stories will always include complex, broken people trying to figure out how to start and keep a relationship as well as lots of hot, steamy sex. As Dorothy sees it, the journey is the best part.

When she's not writing, she's a mother, and a friend to many. She truly lives and loves in technicolor!
Dorothy welcomes emails at: dorothyfshaw@gmail.com and can also be reached at Facebook.com/dorothyfshaw, @dorothyfshaw on Twitter and www.dorothyfshaw.com.



Against the WallAgainst the Wall by Dorothy F. Shaw
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

For those who don’t know me, Dorothy is one of my favorite Authors. I in fact found this book on my own, searching out a book to read of hers, because I was truly desiring a true orgasmic read. Yes, you read that right. And I was hoping there was something out there of hers that I might not have read yet, and when I managed to get to Amazon I found two books, and this one was just listed.

So I started reading it, and then went to Dorothy to yell at her for not telling me about it. That’s how I know it was just listed. I also know some of the answers to the interview questions I ask, before I even ask them, but I did that for you, my readers. ::wink!::

As I opened this book, the first thing that grabbed me, was the dedication. That in itself, will make you think, and it truly goes along with the book, trust me, at the end you will completely understand the dedication even more so.

“Dedication: This short story is dedicated to anyone who’s ever had to let someone go-regardless of the fact that they were still deeply in love with them. When the pain becomes so great, sometimes, we are left with no choice but to save ourselves. And yet, we still wonder….what if?” ~Dorothy F. Shaw

Jake and Maggie have the most loving and orgasmic relationship that you could ever desire. They truly love one another, and the sex is just absolutely perfection.

They truly enjoy one another, but it just seems as though as you are reading this, it is like there are commitment issues. And it is like 'awe come on', are we ever going to go any further, and get more serious, and make the relationship into a real relationship? A true and everlasting keeper kind of forever type of love. But it is like at a sit still. And as you are reading, you just know that Maggie seems to want more, and Jake just seems to be stuck. But on the same token, you know that yes, they do love one another.

And then, comes the “Dear John” letter. I stopped reading. I said out loud, “Oh no you didn’t!!” And I reread it again:

“Please wait, because I’ll be back and than I’ll give you all of me. I promise. Always Jake.”

Um no…Dude. Wait for you? To what?! Grow up?! Do you realize she could find somebody better? What while you are out doing what? Playing the field? Drinking? Doing what you want to do?! Just sit here and wait? NO! Are you for real?!

I kept reading, Maggie knew better than to just sit there waiting, even though she knew she loved him even still. I calmed down. I was angry, and sad, and crying. I could not believe my eyes. I felt bad, and sad, and…oh my goodness this book just tore me up from the floor up.

At this point I knew I had read a five star book. Real emotions and real feelings, and real life. People truly do this, and this really happens, and I just read the ever famous “Dear John” and “Wait for me” game. Many people have gone through this, and some are lame enough to wait. Their choice. I know this is something so heart breaking, because we’ve all had relationships. But the fact is, things like this cause many to go into depressions, without even realizing.

“Against the Wall” is written so realistically that I just couldn’t put it down, and it brought out so many feelings that I enjoyed it immensely. This book is truly worth the read, and as usual Dorothy has kept the readers entertained and on the edge of their seats. Again, this, as with all of Dorothy's books, are a five star read. You need to get it, and read it. You will be "Against the Wall" yourself with so many emotions, trust me!

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Wednesday, February 10, 2016

Romancing Broadway by Debbie Zello



Romancing Broadway

By Debbie Zello

There are so many unique things about this book that fascinated me. To begin, the cover is beautiful, and just looking at it alone, should mesmerize you enough to want to buy this book, let alone read it.

Another unique thing is within the book. The book itself has dual endings, allowing the reader to chose which ending suits their needs with concluding the way they want the ending to succeed for them.

The character Samantha West is a strong willful woman who has dreams, just like any one of us. But she plans to at least try to make an, and hopefully succeed at making it big.

Sam has a best friend named Gabby and together they live in an Apartment in New York City. Just like Sam, she too has goals. 

Eventually a part comes available in an off Broadway Production. With it comes Cesere Bottari who also grasps Sam’s attention. Without even noticing how involved she’s getting with Cesere, Sam doesn’t even realize he’s dominating her life and interfering with everything. 

Disaster arises for Gabby and false accusations end up ruining everything for her. Gabby ends up distraught, but her best friend Sam is seemingly always busy now.


This book, “Romancing Broadway” has two endings, two beautiful, strong, entertaining women, humor, romance, relationship problems, romantic good looking men, and even offers up the world for you to visualize all on a silver platter! This book would make for an excellent movie, so exciting, and so picturesque.

Everything about this book thrilled me! I intend to read it again, only slower so that I can enjoy the characters and sights more thoroughly. This book is truly five stars, I promise you, you will want to read it again, and enjoy it more than once, after all, you can, with two endings! Debbie, truly has a gift, I just hope she plans on including me in her reviews, I totally found a new favorite!
Here are my questions for Debbie:


1. What made you write this book AND how long did it take you?
Samantha came to me in a dream. She told me the whole story over a month or so. I would get up around 4AM to write what she had given me the night before. It took 38 days to write.


2. Who designed this beautiful cover?
I found the pictures and my publisher, Bitten Press LLC put them together. I'm so glad that you like it. It's my favorite cover so far.


3. Do you have photos or descriptions of Samantha and/or Gabby?
No photos of either. I describe them as the best friends push each other in front of the mirror in their tiny apartment. Sam is petite with a dancers body. Gabby has more curves in just the right places. Both women are less concerned with their looks than they are with the love they share for each other. They would do anything for each other. 
Sam is 5'7" with blond hair and grey eyes. Gabby has brown curly hair and brown eyes. She's 5'2" and she says 4 feet of it is boob and butt. 


4. Have you ever been to a real Broadway production? If so- do tell!
Yes, I've been to several. Titanic, Lion King, Miss Saigon, Beauty and the Beast, to name a few.   I live a 90 minute train ride from NYC. It's a fabulous city and I go there often. 


5. What made you decide on two endings AND which one is your favorite?
After I finished the book,  Cesere gave me the second ending. I'm not telling which one I like best. 


6. How long have you been writing? 
I began writing the stories down two years after they started coming to me. It was the summer of 2011. I wrote several stories before I started looking for a publisher. My first book has 4 of the stories, it was published in 2014.  The second 5 stories. 


7. What all education have you had?
Nothing to prepare me to be an author. I'm not an English Major and never took a writing course in my life. This proves that you can change the course you have chosen. Do something totally different. Just do it. 


8. What can you suggest to anyone trying to become a writer? 
Try to write everyday. Even if it's only a few hundred words. Get into the habit of editing as you go. Correct spelling, do the best that you can with punctuation, make proper paragraphs and capitalize appropriately. No editor wants to work on a mess. 
Have your friends and family read your story. Not everything you write is marketable but practice does make perfect. Finally, read as much good literature as you can. The classics as well as contemporary authors.



9. Was it always your dream to be a writer?
No it wasn't. This is as much a surprise to me as if I had won the lottery.


10. Please provide your social and book links:
Debbie Zello Book list and links 

Facebook @
Twitter: @ZelloDzello1

Romancing Broadway by #DebbieZello 
Amazon US:
Amazon UK:
Barnes & Noble

Middle of My Bridge 
Amazon US
 Amazon UK
B&N


Shadow of Him
Amazon US
Amazon UK
B&N


Elizabet Under the back staircase 
Barnes & Noble 
Amazon US 
Amazon UK


The Viscount's Vices: The Love Story of Brook and William
Barnes and noble:
US Amazon:
Amazon UK:


Raising Ren and Cowboys: Sequel to The Viscount's Vices William and Brooks Love Story
Barnes and noble:
Amazon US:
Amazon UK:


Love's Labyrinthine: Five Stories about Love's Twists and Turns
Barnes and Noble:
Amazon US:
Amazon UK:



The Kiss Me Chronicles: Four Short Stories about Love
Barnes and Noble:
Amazon US:
Amazon UK:



Amazon link 

Blog link

Facebook Page


11. Anything to add:
My books are about strong women and confident men. I write history that's easy to understand and interesting to read. I hope to give you something to think about with each book. 


About the Author:


Debbie has always been an avid reader, but writing was not her interest. That was until an illness gave her the time and inspiration needed to begin her journey in words. After writing down a few chapters of a story that had whispered into her head, she gave it to a few friends to read. The rest became her first book, The Kiss Me Chronicles. 
Debbie freely credits her stories to her muses, the characters themselves. They occupy her thoughts and dreams, presenting her with their narratives on their lives and loves. On occasion, she has tried to put her own take on their story, only to be quickly corrected by the true authors.
Debbie has traveled extensively and has a deep love of American history. Her novels are often based on historical events as well as places she has visited. She is also an amateur genealogist, having traced her own family roots.
Debbie currently has eight published books with many more in various stages of production, including a tetralogy of 'what or where is your safe place.' She is also branching out of the romance/historical romance genre to include a teenage appropriate story based on Dorothy's(The Wizard of Oz) great-granddaughter, Dee, and her adventurous shoes. 
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Romancing BroadwayRomancing Broadway by Debbie Zello
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

There are so many unique things about this book that fascinated me. To begin, the cover is beautiful, and just looking at it alone, should mesmerize you enough to want to buy this book, let alone read it.

Another unique thing is within the book. The book itself has dual endings, allowing the reader to chose which ending suits their needs with concluding the way they want the ending to succeed for them.

The character Samantha West is a strong willful woman who has dreams, just like any one of us. But she plans to at least try to make an, and hopefully succeed at making it big.

Sam has a best friend named Gabby and together they live in an Apartment in New York City. Just like Sam, she too has goals.

Eventually a part comes available in an off Broadway Production. With it comes Cesere Bottari who also grasps Sam’s attention. Without even noticing how involved she’s getting with Cesere, Sam doesn’t even realize he’s dominating her life and interfering with everything.

Disaster arises for Gabby and false accusations end up ruining everything for her. Gabby ends up distraught, but her best friend Sam is seemingly always busy now.

This book, “Romancing Broadway” has two endings, two beautiful, strong, entertaining women, humor, romance, relationship problems, romantic good looking men, and even offers up the world for you to visualize all on a silver platter! This book would make for an excellent movie, so exciting, and so picturesque.

Everything about this book thrilled me! I intend to read it again, only slower so that I can enjoy the characters and sights more thoroughly. This book is truly five stars, I promise you, you will want to read it again, and enjoy it more than once, after all, you can, with two endings! Debbie, truly has a gift, I just hope she plans on including me in her reviews, I totally found a new favorite!

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